Posted by Nivedhida Devi in 55 Word Fiction :)
"I cant stay here anymore mammaa..
my strength got drained fighting with the giant of NOBOBY"
She shouted like anything before her pen touches the letter pad.
When it touches.........
"Mammaa I am toooo Happyyyyy...... how are you??? :)
everything is damn good here..............................................."
9 comments
this is not a 55 word fiction story. only 54 word fiction because noboby is not a word)))))))
ha just now counted it it is 42 words. u cheat))))))))))
Hey Nive...
this was fantastic yaar!!! Amazing! hope u comeup with more! u have wonderfully explained the loneliness and the care one takes not to inflict pain on parents :)
@Spidey
the 55 word fiction neednot exactly have 55 words, 55 or less than 55.
hi nive.. nice la..:)
this is the case with most of us wen we stay apart...rite?
is this the season for 55word mania??:)u both posting only these stories...
@ SPIDEY
Is this a testing area?! anyways
i am not cheat.... actually haaa thank u Priyanka :) :) :)
thanx spidey :) :)
@ Priyanka
Thank u Priyanka :) :)
@ JAnaki
Thank u Janaki :) :)
yup.... but a nice feeling!
haha not 55 season.. but we both are new to it :P :P
unakullaiyum ennamo irukku paren!!!!
just kiding.. mam its really awesome.. i have read many short poems.. but this moved me..i think u might have experienced it rite!!
@ Anand...
haha thats k thalaivarae :P
thank u thank u :)....
:) :)
